Kia Ora Baset. I found this post really innovative, I love how you set the scene of the court room and had both an argument for Goldilocks being both innocent and guilty. I notice that your sentences are structured really well, making a point and showing your evidence. I wonder if next time you could focus on writing less like you are talking to the audience.
Side note: Maybe change the colour of Goldilocks text, the gold/ yellow makes it difficult to read.
I have enjoyed reading your blog and noticed the use of colour in the text was very helpful in following who was speaking. I wonder if next time you could try to use stronger colours to make the text stand out a bit more as the lighter colours were a little hard to read on the chromebook. I look forward to reading more of your blogs.
Kia Ora Baset. I found this post really innovative, I love how you set the scene of the court room and had both an argument for Goldilocks being both innocent and guilty. I notice that your sentences are structured really well, making a point and showing your evidence. I wonder if next time you could focus on writing less like you are talking to the audience.
ReplyDeleteSide note: Maybe change the colour of Goldilocks text, the gold/ yellow makes it difficult to read.
Ok, thanks for letting me know Miss Anderson
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I have enjoyed reading your blog and noticed the use of colour in the text was very helpful in following who was speaking. I wonder if next time you could try to use stronger colours to make the text stand out a bit more as the lighter colours were a little hard to read on the chromebook. I look forward to reading more of your blogs.
From Mrs A
Ok, thanks for letting me know.
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