27.8.21
The Crunchiness Taking Over My Mouth
Do you like beef nachos? Today our writing task was to do #DailyWritingTask. We needed to show don't tell and use our five senses to show the reader what we mean in their mind while they read this. I liked this task because Nachos are amazing and you could write whatever you want just inside of the boundaries.
You have inspired my to cook Nachos for dinner tonight Baset! You have used some great describe in your passage. I particularly like "softening sour cream" - good sounds running together here and I get a great picture in my head. I also like the beef was dancing on his tongue. I can see all the senses included as well. Well done! Question - do you like avocado/guacamole on your nacho's?
ReplyDeleteThank you, and Sorry if this offends you but I hate Avocado and guacamole!
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